Weighing Down the Easy SmileLying on shattered glass Contemplating perfectly stillPurpose is apparent (somewhere) In the recessesAttempting hide and seek time creates A rhythm of rising descend I rise I fallIn this journey carousel Eager to catch the brassUntil the veil covers blackBurying me in an avalancheOf labored breath---inhaling, exhalingA voice whispers is this all there is? In faraway dreams I rise from the ashesIn reality I'm divided by the pendulum swingGreat expectations (the reason why)Is anchored securely tightWeighing downThe easy smile
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